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At The beach/Wonder Writing.

One day I was at a beach with my friends and family.I was swimming in the water with my friends.I played beach volleyball too.After playing volleyball I went to buy ice cream for me and my friends.I got Lemon and Lime flavoured ice cream and my friends got Cookie and Cream.


Then I walked to my family.My friends were still at the ice cream shop eating their ice cream.When I got to my family they had put a gazebo up and they had started a bbq.I helped them with the sausages that were on the bbq.


After that I got some bread and tomato sauce.I made myself a sausage sizzle. After eating some food I went to go swimming.Finally I got out of the water and then changed into some new clothes and then got ready to leave and go home.Soon I said goodbye to my friends and family and drove home and had a shower and went to bed and had a nap.

The elephant and the black sat.

Task Description:  I did a wounder writing task that was about a elephant and a black cat.


One hot sunny day I was wandering into a giant forest. Up ahead I saw a river. 


Suddenly I saw an enormous elephant drinking water from the waterfall. I even saw a black cat on a pile of rocks. 


Then the enormous elephant stomped towards the black cat. The black cat moved away. 


Next I went close to the elephant. Then it looked at me. It didn’t care about me so it went back to the black cat. 


After that I went for a swim in the river but then the elephant used his trunk to pick me up and swing me on his back towards the side of the river. 


Then I got my towel and dried myself to get warm. I tried to get the black cat back to land but it was scratching me all over my face and my arms. I was shocked, because he was scratching me.  


So I was trying to feed the black cat with fish. The cat was scared that she wouldn’t come to me.  


But then the elephant came and got the cat.  Then he picked her up and put her on the side of the river.  Then the cat ran away into the forest.

Questions for kiwi kids news.

Task Description: I was reading about a cat that got saved by a police. 1. Who is the main person or group of people in this news article? The police.#

2. What was the key event from the news article? Saving a cat at a house.

3. Where did this event take place? North land  at a house

4. When did this event take place? at night.


1. Find a quote from the main person in this news article?

2. In your own words describe what happened in this news article. Polices heard a noise a house.

3. Find out where this event took place and include some information about this place. North land at house when it was night.

4. Tell us when this event happened and explain what might happen in the future. It happened in north land at a house when it was dark.

5. Explain in your own words why this event took place.So they can save it and let it free so it can find a new home.